I still remember the very first time I lost myself in your eyes. You looked into me, as I unto you. And what I saw there, It terrified me. I, until that point, had never seen two eyed say so much. That minty green accent you laid upon me, Gave me a sensation of how delicate and fragile your heart was. Yet the darkened outline and depth of the gaze, Showed me the power and determination of your soul. At that very moment I knew, I knew my future had just stared me in the eyes. From that moment you have delivered me from my dispair, And completely rightened all of my wrongs. And for this I pray, I pray that you accept my unconditional love, And never ending devotion.
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This is not how a person speaks naturally. It feels like it came from a book. Vows need to flow naturally and in a way in which you’d actually speak to the person face to face.
Loo 2020-05-11
Beautifully written
Thank you for sharing amazing words.
Stephanie 2016-09-13
wow
I am completly bown away. My fiance and I are getting merried soon. It feels like you were reading my mind when you were writing this vows.
thats exactly how I feel it.
Wow this is beutiful.
cansy 2011-09-26
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