Light

I love the second sentence about walking towards the light but maybe the ring as a sign of our undying love and not life? Like it as a final commitment after the Rabi’s part.

Myfanwy 2024-02-10

Lame

Not something I’d use as a vow. It’s kinda boring and lame.

Loo 2020-05-11

amazed

your comments are so p weak - what happens to your love when power failure happens, or the candle wont light cause it is too windy? fmdead

Two Socks 2011-06-07

like

This is an ok one however I would not use it I am doing sand ceremony

ann 2010-07-08

Wow

.......I was only looking for a couple of vows I could use in a story, no need to almost make me cry.

Sam 2009-11-08

great

the perfect words for a vow. my wedding was perfect.

melony 2009-06-05

God

If we walk in Towards Gods enternal flame how can we fail at marriage, this is a very beautiful poem and straight forward

Cory 2009-05-12

lovely

I think this is so simple and wonderful... am thinking about this one myself..

Colleen 2009-01-15

vdfhre

A "sign" of life!?!....."walking towards the light"!?! ...Is someone dying? One of the worst vows I think I've heard so far!

None 2009-01-03

booo

Dont go towards the light, is that what happens when individuals die but dont go to the light and they come back to life, soooo walking towards the light's means you life is ending?

crys 2008-04-26

wow

Wow. This poem is touching. Short but does the trock perfectly.

Mel 2007-10-03

Perfect

Perfect for partof a candlelight wedding ceremony! Ourwedding will be a candlelight ceremony.

Kim 2006-08-31