There’s a big problem here

While there is a lot of beautiful content here, in reality there are parts that are awful and weak.
“My intent cannot be forever… I promise you only that as long as I am able I will love you” and ending with that line again, for emphasis, yikes!

So if one day after an argument they think, nope, I’m not able to love you anymore, then that’s the end of the relationship and they haven’t even broken their vows.

Honestly, if I was a bride hearing those words on my wedding day I would question the commitment of the person saying them to me.

Take out those lines that sound like they’re trying to add in a loophole/escape/way out if things don’t turn out the way they hoped, change them to words of actual commitment and promise, and then they will be very beautiful, meaningful, heartfelt vows.

Jenn 2023-05-29

Love this

Never did I really think I'd find that one.
I have this and a lot of vows before have made me cry because to know what real love is, You really can't put it into words.
All I know is I was going along mostly happy with life and I walked in through his door that night. And all before him were mere parts in leading me to him, the one I will love forever.
There's no need to even think of who I could find.
He was the wish, I had wished upon a star every night since I was little.
To know deep down in my soul, that he was my one, true and real love. As I told him, "You sang to me a song, only my soul could hear."

Chas klapperich 2021-03-03

wow

This one has spoken wonders to my heart.

Daijah 2014-03-23

love this

i love these vows. amazing.

futuremrssharp 2012-09-27

love and useing it

I really like this one alot. It remind's me of me and my current fiancee.

Nicole Schmidt 2012-02-05