my best friends wedding

My closest girlfriend send this to me and as I began to read this, I envisioned her and all of her beautiful characteristics. As I continued to read I thought of them together and smiled, concurring with the intoxicating words I read. As I finished I actually had tears in my eyes for what I read was absolutely beautiful and didn't realize how much I yearned for this beauty myself... congratulations to a beautiful pair! What a beautiful blessing...

krissy 2014-10-29

unrealistic

As romantic as they sound, this is a completely unrealistic view of marriage.

hdmt 2014-07-17

sweet

Thanks, I needed this for this Friday

Mark 2013-04-22

justice

Simply perfect.

Vanessa 2012-05-16

degrading

This is degrading to women or men because it should be an equal marriage

amanda 2011-03-24

Amen

This is a portrait of a biblical marriage.

Bob 2010-07-22

love it

I think its beautiful and heartfelt and not at all cheesy

kristin 2010-06-12

Awesome

I love this so much.

Sam O. 2010-03-30

I love this

This is so beautiful.... I love it. I'm just afraid I'd be struck down with lightning if I said these in church. Quiet and gentle spirit? Not really me.

Lovely vows, though!!! :)

Jen 2009-06-17

i dont think so

seeking to meet your every need I think not! He has to do some things for himself.

Micki t 2009-03-03

beautiful

i love this statement and i plan to use this for my marriage in my second block class

princess 2008-09-11

Gentle

I think this could have been worded a bit better, but I do love the part about striving for harmony with a quiet and gentle spirit.

Jenna 2008-08-05

I like this very much

This works very well. I love it's simplicity and directness. This is what i think makes a good marriage.

Andrew 2008-07-27

good words

Caroline, wedding vows aren't supposed to be poems. It doesn't matter how it sounds as much as it matters what you say.

Andrew 2008-06-17

eHarmony

we met on eHarmony, we'll be incorporating this into our June 6 wedding! (cuz it says harmony in it!)

Taylor 2008-06-01

lame

Vowing to desire to strive to try is a little to wishy washy. Let's have something more definitive in vows! Otherwise, why get everyone together to hear about some half-assed suggestion of a promise?

penelope 2007-08-08

Err...

Caroline, it isn't a poem, it's a vow. Do you want your vows to rhyme?!

Leyla 2007-06-23

Sweet

Short and sweet.

Cynthia 2007-06-08

love it

a beautiful statement of how a marriage should work.

shirree 2005-05-01

This is me

This has me written all over it! I think that I will use this at my wedding.

David P. 2005-03-28